-ab ab rhyme scheme
-imagery-painting pictures with words-we see the kite
-poet compares kite to bird
-tail and wings like a bird
-poet is happy flying kite--he knows how to fly kite
-ab ab rhyme scheme
-imagery-painting pictures with words-we see the kite
-poet compares kite to bird
-tail and wings like a bird
-poet is happy flying kite--he knows how to fly kite
-best friend is a dog
-aa,bb rhyme scheme and rhyme in same line
-things dog does with poet tells us dog is best friend
-ab ab rhyme scheme
-caterpillar in a hurry because afraid to be eaten
-poem about change--life and dying--and change
-poem moves like a caterpillar--short line, long line
-death and rebirth
-ab ab rhyme scheme
-three exclamation marks because piggies go wee on his knee!!!
-piggies not very clean in poem
-poem is about being six
-ab ab rhyme scheme
-repetition of when I was
-builds up to being smarter with age
-person is running around in a revolving door
-sore, before, more rhyme
-beginning line rhymes
-volving is ending sound of revolving
-dizzy feeling from poem because of repeating words
-each season has something about it
-ab ab rhyme scheme
-images of floers, swimming,pumpkins, snow
-seasons repeated in poem 3 times
-seasons repeat every year
-this poem is like a song because it rhymes
-repeating ing and next line taken away
-asks questions second line
-Can and I am repeated
-action words-verbs
-tired person at end--winds down
-tw and sw sound
-ping sound
-poem makes you tired--person dancing too much-11 lines to read-tiring
-punctuation -question marks, then last line has exclamation mark to show the person is really tired
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-counting poem-counting down
rhyme scheme-ab ab
repetition of words-then, little, flew, were
repeating words tell us we are counting down
rhythm-first and second line have the same rhythm
rhythm helps us remember the poem
rhythm makes the poem sound like a song
action in poem takes place outside
poem is easier to remember when it is not too long
-each second line rhymes with the sound of ee
-bees get pollen from flowers
-water flows from rivers to seas
-water helps us survive
-every person needs water
-drink water, play, bathe, brush your teeth, make popsicles and juice, ice, swim
-repetition of the word water, for the, And
-nature needs water, us too, every living thing needs water
LOTS OF BEDS
I have a bed with pillows.
I have a bed of stuffed toys.
I have a bed with a blanket.
I have a bed with stamps.
I have a bed with books.
I have a bed with lots of stuff.
But my bed is best for sleeping!!!!!!
Onomatopoeia
SLAM!
BAM!
HISS!
ALLITERATION